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[CENTER]السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

هذه ابيات بسيطة كتبتها عن ماحدث من استهزاء برسولنا الحبيب عليه أفضل الصلاة و التسليم
مع العلم انني ليس لدي خلفيه جيده عن أدب اللغة الانجليزية
وكم أتمنى ان احصل على نقد مفيد ور أي صريح
حتى ولو كان من مبتدئين في اللغة الانجليزية





They will see…


How dare they
How dare they

Talking like that
About the best ever man

Drawing silly, stupid draws
With no thinking and law

It only means, they've empty minds
Pathetic, with no a right

They'll remember our words
They'll remember our swords

They'll try to be forgiven
But that's the point… where's no come back

They will wish to be sands
Just because, of the punishment they'll have


They will see
How changes can be

They will see
How they will be

[الشــاهينة الأزديــة]

Wonderful ..





.. It's strong words .. and we are feeling that you are feeling sensation
.. real creativity .. So , Go on ..




Thank U ..







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من زمرة المتقين

thanks a lot for encouraging me
you know sister
I always write my feelings in English !!!
because it's much easier for me
although, Arabic is much much much more beautiful
but, unfortunately I'm not good at it at all

thanks again
and if you have any English poems or even thoughts, please let us share it with you

[الشــاهينة الأزديــة]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة غائبة راحلة من زمرة المتقين thanks a lot for encouraging me you know sister I always write my feelings in English !!! because it's much easier for me although, Arabic is much much much more beautiful but, unfortunately I'm not good at it at all thanks again and if you have any English poems or even thoughts, please let us share it with you

U Welcome ..


وأبشري .. But not yet ..

I well come backe after .. Ok ? .. Thank U





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ان شاء الله

I'll wait you sister

[الشــاهينة الأزديــة]

Hello sister ..



How are U ? i have suggestion for U ..


Do you agree to make this page dedicated to writing the events which got us in the past periods of our lives
Instead of writing Thoughts ?



I think it will be best.. and very useful to enrich Section ..


Wait your consent my sister ..





Thank U ..






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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة من زمرة المتقين Hello sister .. How are U ? i have suggestion for U .. Do you agree to make this page dedicated to writing the events which got us in the past periods of our lives Instead of writing Thoughts ? I think it will be best.. and very useful to enrich Section .. Wait your consent my sister .. Thank U .. ..

Yes, of course sister I agree
you're right it'll be much better than thoughts
but will it be alright if we right our feelings about things happened in the past, but in our personal life??

I applogy , because I was busy last week so I couldn't comment in what you've suggested earlier

so, may be you can start?

[الشــاهينة الأزديــة]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة غائبة راحلة Yes, of course sister I agree you're right it'll be much better than thoughts but will it be alright if we right our feelings about things happened in the past, but in our personal life?? I applogy , because I was busy last week so I couldn't comment in what you've suggested earlier so, may be you can start?

Cordially ..






.. But not now .. I will come back later my dear ..






Thank U..






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[إشراقة]

وتز ذس



















ياليت ترجمون لنا عشان نستفيد







ودمتم سالمين

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة من زمرة المتقين Cordially .. .. But not now .. I will come back later my dear .. Thank U.. ..

GREAT

thank U sister
and take your time